[chorus]
i'm share in my mother fuckin dream
aint i loose my fagot ass team
my attitude is MOTHER FUCKIN good
than my block is holly wood
every place you can taste my food
i get shood like you understood
thats my flow wILL kill robin hood
i'm illy but you scare a trilly

[verse1]


i fuck THE BITCHS like MY gangster
gms is the best more than forester
we bust us enemy as mother fucker monster
i spread with a mother fucker buster
young pyroman make a fire
when u fight you look as tire
but i never show you how to be a liair
what you think about this shit nigga
don u have an ambition to trespass gigga
i wanna move to south
but you open your motherfucker mouth
i say welcome to your doubt
i'm way to fly but too high
just like me rap in very tight
every day i get your way
no way no way hide my way
i spread with atx better day
as dope man nigga beat down low

[chorus]

i'm share in my mother fuckin dream
aint i loose my fagot ass team
my attitude is MOTHER FUCKIN good
than my block is holly wood
every place you can taste my food
i get shood like you understood
thats my flow wILL kill robin hood
i'm illy but you scare a trilly

VERSE2

i did not accept your law
no more street i scare so dont care
i watch you but no more and square
i wanna rap it so fast and blast
you turn my head and switch my taste
you think my hood cant go down
we spend more time in this a town
take my squad and talk about my own
G.O.S is fablous forever
i see you where ever
i dont give up for never
A.T.X,G.MIKS,DOPEMASTER WERE CUSTOMER
I fuck like that in my hummer
i dont care about the sucker
but but pursue the mother fucker

[chorus]

i'm share in my mother fuckin dream
aint i loose my fagot ass team
my attitude is MOTHER FUCKIN good
than my block is holly wood
every place you can taste my food
i get shood like you understood
thats my flow wILL kill robin hood
i'm illy but you scare a trilly

If you make your lyrics in english, I'll make my post in english then.
Did you ever try to see the amounts of motherfucker/ing you have in these lyrics ?
I don't like the main style, kinda gangsta rap, but you do rap as you want it, and it's your choice. The rhymes aren't bad, but you often choose the same. I mean, sometimes, you got six time a rhyme in "er" that appears, I think you should change a bit.
Not bad at all, just not my style.
Peace.

Tks! I'll consider your advice.