https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Q9Tl7E5cKr4

Laryn's

gimme that beat fool, its a full time jack move
dont worry skano ill give it back soon
That hot like fourty points of Iverson
In the same match
Connection is Brooklyn and Essonne
Me in basket homie i dribbling like Nash
And my opponents are here but ass down
Cross over and like Yo Ming i smash
Look my statistics,homie damn i’m sick
Call the nurse i play like Duncan for Spurs
So hot joint you listen that and then you jump
So high and of elephant you arrive on his trumph
Fat beat if his a guy he got kilos of a man plump
Nah too fat he got many kilos like Mr Klump
That fat and so good like the brazilian Ronaldo
Very fast defenders do know what they do
France,Corbeil and Evry i was born
But now in american i rap with Jay-z and Joe Budden
I got little level about 2 men on it
That true but well i’m not a big shit
Now stop i don’t here for tell of my life
And say in this rap who is rife fuck that
Joe Budden,Laryn’s and author of Numb yes is Hov
Understand?Rims so hot on pump it up now people move
That street dancer shit fat beat formy verse not long
I’m who?Answer a little rapper from Essonne
Come on!

Jay-z

gimme that beat fool, its a full time jack move
dont worry skano ill give it back soon
just havin a little fun, wassup my nigga?
S dot collection
black album comin soon
just gonna vent a little bit
have a little fun with it
yes yes

hey nobody dumpin on hove
you aint in sanitation or sanitarium
what are you crazy jay-z'll bury em
i'll get you drug out the club they have to carry em
your head bug out i'll raid niggas scared of em
worry im not mike jordan
of the mic recordin
hovi baby you kobe, maybe tracy mcgrady
matter fact you harold miner, jr rider
washed up on marijuana
even worse you a pervis ellis
you worthless fella
you aint no athlete you shawn bradley
i aint talkin to nobody in particular
my flow just vehicular homicide whem im kicken em
yes, anybody in my path
is a car crash waitin to happen
nigga what?
i got my foot on the door
on the post of this rap game and i aint lettin up
yea whos the nicest life of lifeless mic devices
and i dont write this i just mic this
i will it to happen
one take hove im real in this rappin
my new name is just the facts
while the rest of yall just adjust the facts
put words together, just to match
i say what i feel yall adjust to that
i do the opposite of yall so i just attract
the realer audience usually unjustly black
know my flow and the shit they go just match
like the sound of my voice and a choice just track
i just tackle the something the flack of the public
nothin, i know real niggas happen to love it
if you dont like it or look in the mirror
most likely you aint livin so you dont get it
you aint did it so you can envision it
the picture im paintin aint vivid
the language im spittin is so foreign to ya
she was starvin a dude to ya
growin up hard in a little apartment illude to ya
im just talkin to ya

Joe Budden
gimme that beat fool
its a full time jack move
fine jay web said take it back dude
its hot
minute or to we play ball now
listen im just havin some fun
no

part in the future
sing the track now
spend a good week hova
you can bring it back now
all these rappers is cookin crack now
took the realness out the game its time to put it back in
the fans finally got it understood they just gappin
while joeys in the hood like madden
whoa
success is wrapped up
checks just rack up
everybodys a killer but the deaths dont add up
everybodys a hustler but the money aint comin in
yall is it just my math sucks? nah
time im a super stuck cheat they wealth
everybodys so scurred to just be they self
and the base and your boys get found like the cool
so we could sound like loon or pound like boom
dont end up a dead man for the cheddar
the way to play is joey in *Def Jam Vendetta* for real
on your pro two blues and dont be shocked
open the booth door we be like old school move it
aint goin to be a tray fee jay-z they be murdered
joey the future im more like dirt
anybody buyin respect me
try and wet me
yall dudes will never make it
your a Tyus Edney
im a standout like Yao Ming
im whats sparkin now
like fallback Shaq
im startin now
boys poppin it toys poppin spit
im not from round these parts im Stojakovic
let me hear your man say im the Jordan of rappin
he's gettin fatigued girlie his scorin is lackin
legacy is gettin ruined and you dont want that
so pretty much learn from him
dont come back
and rap is gettin wag top
g's are steppin
cause you are not that hot
dont believe the yes men
it aint about whos better than uh
its so evident
they hard to be real with no evidence
and i aint comin at jay
cuz hes the greatest dreamer
but he already laid the way
im just layin my seed in
not the same way i was
dude im done drivin now
im in your 745 plus 2
dont have your label call mine
no extracurricular
rappers is all girls who is extraparticular
seen many men with the jade
next time you listen to many men ill make sure you relate
only jay coulda came
just blazed it like me
everybody else chills
just glazed kid agree
packin a mackin in the back of an acura no
flappin the gat we be rappin the caddy but naw
what you want punk
double clip pump
ride by slump forth cocked playa on top
hater warm rock with his teeth toes wrapped
with the brand new savior of east coast rap
dont worry yo i'll bring the east coast back
no parties this aint a movie but meet joe black
tryin to relate to it i just speak those facts
if you was in the front now your seat goes back
what the deallin
like new york been soft since bin laden came thru and crushed the buildings
kinda restore the feelin this is to be continued
im just speakin through ya

Mettez des avis svp

Tu vois avec une instru ça rend beaucoup mieux! C'est encore travaillable mais franchement c'est bien avec une instru t'as un bon flow!!! Bien joué!

ué pas mal. une bonne évolution par rapport à tes impro, c'est bien, tu progresse mec

Merci d'autres avis svp

Mets sur zshare stp, j'arrive pas à lire sur youtube.

http://www.zshare.net/video/larynsjay-zjoe-budden-pump-it-up-remix-wmv.html

Mette des avis pour mon son svp

jeime bien moi mais on enten une coupure kan ta fini juste avant que jy-z commence et sa fer con autrement ses bine continu

Merci d'autres avis svp

Ton anglais...Travaille le car il est foireux et l'accent aussi.

au debut, quand tu gueule c'est pas top.

Le son general est assez sourd.

La qualité varie assez fort quand ca passe a jay-z. y a un grand contrast entre ta partie et les autres.

... a part ca, 5'56 de musique pour 1'10 de toi, t'es pas tres present.

Le volume de la voix varie.
ton flow a certains moments et fort bon, mais a d'autre il peu etre amelioré.

Sinon, je saisi pas trop l'utilité de le mettre sur youtube... juste pour voir des photos defiler...

Sinon ca va, un bon son... mais sans +

Bonne chance pour la suite.

D'autres avis svp

Ouai cecy T a bien résume !

Par contre tu pourrais me mettre en contact vk jay-z car j'aurais besoin de lui pour un feat ^^